Anonymous Peer Feedback 1:

LO1: Good to point out how students aren’t engaging in their own research and why that happens

LO2: It wasn’t clear how the literature review and other methods are going to address the problem

LO3: Good use of co-creation and fashion as lived experience

LO4: Very good presentation, clarify your intentions in terms of this learning criteria

Other comments:
Well done!

Anonymous Peer Feedback 2:

LO1: Very relevant topic 

LO2: 

LO3: A variety of research methods, be clearer with what are the effects of them? 

LO4: Ongoing, but there is evaluation along the way of your research. 

Other comments:

Anonymous Feedback 3:

LO1: Good context and overview to thinking of different fashions – particularly the intersections between modernity/ fashion and decoloniality. You gave a very clear introduction and linked this to social justice and explained you research question.

LO2: Can you explain your methods more clearly? Spend time on this and help the listener understand. Are you doing document analysis? What kind of interview are you carrying out? What kind of analysis? Who are your participants/ How many?

LO3: Once you clarify the methods and collect the data you can review the process. This is where explaining your approach to the analysis will be very important.

LO4: You speak very clearly about the findings – make sure you are as confident speaking about the whole research process. Can you link the proposed interventions to your research question/ data and findings?

Other comments:
The project has real potential and I am looking forward to hearing how you implement the research process.